While I did fav this drawing, it seems sorta odd. Her face I can sorta see the likeness, but it might just be the angle. I have now problem with her butt, hips, and thighs/legs.

However, her breasts seem disproportionally smaller than they should be given her weight gain. Lets face its Jessica has juggs (for lack of a better term) and they should appear larger.

And that leaves her stomach/belly area, I can see what you were trying to do by having her double belts push her belly fat both above and below her waistline. But something just doesn't seem right especially below her waist. I have no problem with the belly apron outline in her pants, but I think there should have been a bulging out as well. That's just my feeling.

Like I said above I fav'd this drawing, but IMHO I don't think its one of your best efforts.

Nice

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MacKenzie Davidson

Indeed it wasn't. To be honest, I found this in a folder of mine. it was dated March 5th.

It's mostly scrap worthy but I figured I'd upload it since I found it.

Thanks for the suggestions/comments. I take them as always. Always next time to fatten her.

Cool, you accept criticism. I agree with what has said so far, but I also have a few things to add. The breasts are not really small, but really more lopsided, and they cut into the belly. What you need to do is raise them up, and give them a little more depth, it's problematic where they're at now. The neck, really man, you need to work that out, because it's just too long. It looks like her face is emerging from the spot where it should have been at, and that fatal flaw there threw the whole picture out of whack. The belly already has some problems because of the breast cutting in, but the shape in general is just weird. It almost looks like a goomba from the mario series, and when it gets below those belts, it looks like she has a big ol wang down there because you just drew it too low. Plain and simple, if you had just raised it there the darn thing would have been a whole lot better. The butt and legs are facing the wrong way, it's just wrong, the whole bottom.

Now lets not pretend the picture doesn't have it's fair share of fine points, because it really does have some great areas. The hair on here has great movement, it's very full, very artistic, and while you didn't capture all the highlights I'd like to have seen, it's done beautifully. Her chin has a nice shape to it. It makes her look pretty, young, and plump. The belts too, I must say nice job on, you really did well texturing those to give them a nice tiger printed pattern.

Now the final grade may seem harsh, but it's only because there's so much that still needs to be improved upon. It's a 3/5

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"In order that every man presents his views without penalty there must be a spirit of tolerance in all of us." -Albert Einstein

'New' or 'reviously unseen' work is always welcome from you.

This time there was something just some things off that I needed to comment on them.

I hope to see more of Jessica and from you in the future.

Thanks for the lengthy feedback. I take it in creatively.

Your welcome, and please don't take offense, a critique is merely a tool used to refine your own skills.

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"In order that every man presents his views without penalty there must be a spirit of tolerance in all of us." -Albert Einstein

I am aware of that and even if you were out for blood with your words I wouldn't mind as it coems with being an artist.